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From:annatheskip
Date:July 15th, 2004 06:29 pm (UTC)

Good lord...

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:D...Old habits die hard, I guess. I see where I used [] instead of <> to make intalics...and a extra comma or two...But what can I say? I have no beta-er, sadly.

Oh well...thanks, Ruby! Yes, it is Draco, as I hoped most would guess by the description of him in the mirror. And yes, the lady was Ginny. She is quite mean to him, but...She had to be for the sake of the piece.

I still don't like it. Something about it just isn't quite right, and I don't mean the gramatical mistakes. I can't quite put my finger on what it is though. Maybe it's because it's my first Draco/Ginny piece, I dunno. I just don't know...
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